Monday, September 5, 2011

The detective


As Rusty walked to his truck he thought over the events of the last few hours. What have I gotten myself into? The truth was Rusty wasn't that eager to find his wife.Sure he lost all his money but in some ways it had been worth it. If he had to be honest, it really wasn't that much money. Just what was left after the bills were paid for the month. Cigarette and beer money. The house was quiet without Brandi around. No “Rusty do this” or “why did you do that.” Brandi really knew how to bust his chops. However he wouldn't mind finding the “ hoove” as everyone at the factory called Keith. He was constantly sucking up to people. It was ridiculous. What some people wouldn't do! He wouldn't mind teaching him a thing or two! As Rusty climbed into his truck he thought again about Drew. What an intense kid! It would be kind of fun to be a detective. He had always thought of himself as having an inquisitive mind. If he hadn't landed the factory job he most likely would have been an investigator or something of the sort. As Rusty started his truck, for the first time in a long time he was looking forward to the week ahead.

7 comments:

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  2. I like it I think Brandi was the perfect name

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  3. Thanks! I can't seem to get it to print in a normal paragraph.

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  4. I like that he 'landed the factory job', very funny!

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  5. I can't figure out how to add and I have some brilliant ideas too. :(

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  6. You simply go to a new post and write that you're working on it.

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  7. I don't have an option for a new post. Do I have to be invited?

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